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1. George is doing a MSc in civil engineering.
2. I would be grateful if you would send it to the address above-mentioned.
3. People think he resigned on his own accord.
4. To tell you the truth, I can’t accept people who think about money all the time.
5. I started to learn English with the aim to become a teacher.
6. Everybody should be given the chance to reach their aims.
7. It is not allowed to talk in the library.
8. A child learns a lot by doing things alone.
9. Rollo Martins was a very good writer and he was not famous.
3应该是把on该成of吧?
我觉得4,5,7 ,8,都很有问题。
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第1个回答 2007-01-03
1. George is doing a MSc in civil engineering.
改:George is doing an MSc in civil engineering.
2. I would be grateful if you would send it to the address above-mentioned.
改:I will be grateful if you would send it to the address mentioned above.
3. People think he resigned on his own accord.
改:People think that he resigned on his own accord.
4. To tell you the truth, I can’t accept people who think about money all the time.
这句话挺好的 语法上我不觉得有什么毛病。
5. I started to learn English with the aim to become a teacher.
改:I started to learn English with AN aim to become a teacher.
"AN aim" 为之准确
6. Everybody should be given the chance to reach their aims.
diction用的不当
改: Everybody should be given the chance to reach their goals.
7. It is not allowed to talk in the library.
(语法上okay)
8. A child learns a lot by doing things alone.
(okay!)
9. Rollo Martins was a very good writer and he was not famous.
改:Rollo Martins was a very good writer BUT he was not famous.
改:George is doing an MSc in civil engineering.
2. I would be grateful if you would send it to the address above-mentioned.
改:I will be grateful if you would send it to the address mentioned above.
3. People think he resigned on his own accord.
改:People think that he resigned on his own accord.
4. To tell you the truth, I can’t accept people who think about money all the time.
这句话挺好的 语法上我不觉得有什么毛病。
5. I started to learn English with the aim to become a teacher.
改:I started to learn English with AN aim to become a teacher.
"AN aim" 为之准确
6. Everybody should be given the chance to reach their aims.
diction用的不当
改: Everybody should be given the chance to reach their goals.
7. It is not allowed to talk in the library.
(语法上okay)
8. A child learns a lot by doing things alone.
(okay!)
9. Rollo Martins was a very good writer and he was not famous.
改:Rollo Martins was a very good writer BUT he was not famous.