翻译英语:我的好友名叫琳达，在某些方面我们看起来一样，在某些方面看起来不一样，我们都黑眼睛和黑头发

My best friend is Linda. We look similar in some ways, but not in others. We both have black eyes and black hair. She is taller and quieter than I am. We both like reading.追答

个人觉得“在某些方面看起来不一样”很啰嗦，最好删去。没有这半句要表达的意思也很明确了

My best friend is called Linda. In some ways, we looked the same; in other ways we looked different. We both have black eyes and black hair. Linda is taller and gentler (quieter) than me. We both loved reading books.
楼主，你的文章没有过渡句所以读起来很单调。