关于一方面,另一方面 的表达 (英语)

常见的观点对立式的作文里面的支架
不要ONE HAND之流的,要高级点的,至少也是counterpart
最好是长难句

给出两个对立的事物或者一个事物对立的两个方面,要求考生支持一方并进行说明。

具体表述如下:

topic: some people like a, others like b. which one do you prefer—a or b? give specific reasons t to illustrate your answer.

在这个命题形式的摸版中有些大写字母的含义如下:

a和b表示选择的两种观点;

choose a和choose b表示对a,b的选择;

do c指题目中提及的某件事情,如:some people prefer a in order to do c.

请考生在实际写作中根据题目天如他们各自所代表的内容。

model (1)

some people hold the opinion that a is superior to b in many ways. others, however, contradict a. personally, i would prefer①because i think a has more advantages.

there are numerous reasons why②, and i would like in here explain a few of the most important ones. the main reason is that③. it can be given a concrete example④.

another reason why i advocate the attitude of a is that⑤. take the case of a thing that⑥.

one very strong argument for a is that⑦. this demonstrate the undeniable fact that⑧.

of course, choosing b also has advantages to some extent, ⑨.

but if all these factors are contemplated, the advantages of a carry more weight than hose of b. from what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that⊙.

①表明自己的观点;赞同

②填入赞同a的句子

③赞同a的第一个原因

④举例说明原因一

⑤赞同a的第二个原因

⑥举例说明原因二

⑦说明赞叹a的第三个原因

⑧表明a的优势

⑨列出b的1-2个优势

⊙总结观点

model (2)

Some people believe A. These people point out the fact that①. However, other people believe B. They point out that②. They say that③. As far as I am concerned, my preference is for A.

The main reason why I prefer A is that④. We can see that⑤.

A more personal reason why I like A is⑥. As I member, ⑦.
A is superior in another way, that is ⑧ because that⑨.

As a matter of fact, there are also some disadvantages in A, such as⊙. But these can be compensated by its advantages. So, in comparison with B, A is surely a clever choice.
①支持A的理由
②支持B的理由
③进一步阐述支持B的原因
④支持A的第一个原因
⑤举例说明原因一
⑥支持A的第二个原因
⑦举例说明原因二
⑧支持A的第三个原因
⑨举例说明原因三
⊙列举出A的劣势

MODEL (3)
It is often difficult for people to decide whether to choose A or choose B. But for us students, the advantages of A always outweigh the disadvantages. Those who object A claim that①.

Although at first glance these arguments sound reasonable and appealing, they are not borne out by a careful consideration. ②

In addition, ③. As a result, ④.

Finally, the incomparable advantages of A is that ⑤.

From the above, I think A has a lot of advantages compared with B. So⑥.
①反对A的理由
②支持A的第一个原因并举例说明
③支持A的第二个原因并举例说明
④A的优势
⑤支持A的第三个原因并举例说明
⑥重申观点

2. 比较不同观点的优劣

给出两个对立事物或一个事物对立的两个方面,要求考生说明二者为什么不同或比较它们的优缺点,并给出理由。
具体表述如下:
TOPIC: Some people believe that A while others consider B more appropriate. Give advantages and disadvantages of the two positions and explain which position you support.
MODEL (1)
A and B are two totally different ideas that have caused heated debate over a long period of time. Anyway, I agree with the idea of A. However, it is unfair to say which is better than the other if we don’t see both sides of the story in the following paragraphs.

Some people believe B because①. These people point out the fact that②. They also argue that ③.

However, other people stand on a very different ground. They believe that④. They firmly point out that⑤. An example can give the details of this argument: ⑥. In addition, ⑦.

In a word, A is too tempting not to be chosen. A, as shown above, has ⑧. ⑨.
①人们支持B的第一个原因
②进一步阐述支持B的第一个原因
③支持B的第二个原因
④支持A的第一个原因
⑤进一步阐述支持A的第一个原因
⑥举例说明支持A的第一个原因
⑦支持A的第二个原因
⑧选择A的第一个好处
⑨选择A的第二个好处
MODEL (2)
Some people believe that①. Other people take the view that②. While both methods may have their advantages and disadvantages, they can be applied under different circumstances. Afterwards, I will explain my opinion about it.

For A, ③

But this also demonstrates that④

Moreover, ⑤

B, on the other hand, ⑥. For example, ⑦.

In my opinion, the advantages of B are more than those of A because B fits me better in two ways; First⑧. Second, ⑨.
①人们的第一种观点
②人们的第二种观点
③A的一个优势
④A所隐含的劣势
⑤A的一个大缺点
⑥B的一个明显优势
⑦举例说明B的优势
⑧对我来讲,B的第一个优势
⑨对我来讲,B的第二个优势

以下是短文写作中使用率最高、覆盖面最广的基本句式,每组句式的功能相同或相似,考生可根据自己的情况选择其中的1-2个,做到能够熟练正确地仿写或套用。

1.表示原因

1)There are three reasons for this.
2)The reasons for this are as follows.
3)The reason for this is obvious.
4)The reason for this is not far to seek.
5)The reason for this is that...
6)We have good reason to believe that...
例如:
There are three reasons for the changes that have taken place in our life.Firstly,people’s living standard has been greatly improved.Secondly,most people are well paid, and they can afford what they need or like.Last but not least,more and more people prefer to enjoy modern life.
注:如考生写第一个句子没有把握,可将其改写成两个句子。如:Great changes have taken place in our life. There are three reasons for this.这样写可以避免套用中的表达失误。

2.表示好处
1)It has the following advantages.
2)It does us a lot of good.
3)It benefits us quite a lot.
4)It is beneficial to us.
5)It is of great benefit to us.
例如:
Books are like friends.They can help us know the world better,and they can open our minds and widen our horizons.Therefore,reading extensively is of great benefit to us.

3.表示坏处
1)It has more disadvantages than advantages.
2)It does us much harm.
3)It is harmful to us.
例如:
However,everything divides into two.Television can also be harmful to us.It can do harm to our health and make us lazy if we spend too much time watching television.

4.表示重要、必要、困难、方便、可能
1)It is important(necessary,difficult,convenient, possible)for sb.to do sth.
2)We think it necessary to do sth.
3)It plays an important role in our life.
例如:
Computers are now being used everywhere,whether in the government,in schools or in business.Soon, computers will be found in every home,too.We have good reason to say that computers are playing an increasingly important role in our life and we have stepped into the Computer Age.

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第1个回答  2009-08-24
For one thing …… for another
另外的转折型可以么,或者是连接的那种

二楼的,诶,句式高级作文才可以的高分那
第2个回答  2009-08-24
For one thing....For another
From another point of view
第3个回答  2009-08-24
on one side of the coin,,, on the opposite,,,
第4个回答  2009-08-24
for one thing……for another,不知道这个算不算……不知道你写作文为什么连连词都要这么复杂。我个人觉得文章在这些方面到是不用太高级,不然老师都看不懂或者觉得有点怪。

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