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I had a long holiday for May Day .I was very happy, because I could do anything I want(或者：I can do what i want to do).
During those days. I enjoyed myself. At first, I went to the zoo to see lovely animals. And then. I went to the sea world to see beautiful fishes. That was very interesting.We went to Linxia to visit my grandparents and to eat delicious（意为“美味的”） foods. We rode（骑 的过去式） horse on the garden(花园）and had a fun with another children. It was very exciting. After that, I had a party and invited(邀请）some of my best friends（ some of my best friends：我一些最好的朋友）to visit（注意！不是探望，是参观） my house. My mother bought（buy的过去式） a lot of tasty（有吸引力的，可翻译为：美味的） foods for us, we also took（take的过去式） many photos（take photos：拍照）on the party. We played very happy. I also watched lots of carton films（carton films，可以大概翻译成：卡通片） at home, they were wonderful（最棒的）.
I like the holiday.
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During those days. I enjoyed myself. At first, I went to the zoo to see lovely animals. And then. I went to the sea world to see beautiful fishes. That was very interesting.We went to Linxia to visit my grandparents and to eat delicious（意为“美味的”） foods. We rode（骑 的过去式） horse on the garden(花园）and had a fun with another children. It was very exciting. After that, I had a party and invited(邀请）some of my best friends（ some of my best friends：我一些最好的朋友）to visit（注意！不是探望，是参观） my house. My mother bought（buy的过去式） a lot of tasty（有吸引力的，可翻译为：美味的） foods for us, we also took（take的过去式） many photos（take photos：拍照）on the party. We played very happy. I also watched lots of carton films（carton films，可以大概翻译成：卡通片） at home, they were wonderful（最棒的）.
I like the holiday.
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My holiday
This holiday ,I went to ShangHai with my family.It was so wonderful that I
could't forget.
We took a bus to Shanghai.The first day ,we visit the Bund.There are lots of wonderful tall buildings.I can see The Oriental Pearl Tower there.It's in PuXi,it'really high!
The second day ,we went to Century Park.
We went boating in the lake ,enjoying the beaty of nature.The wind was warm,like mother's hand.Then we went to see a film.That 's a happy day.
The third day ,we came back. My holiday is so great that Iwant to
go there again
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My holiday
This holiday ,I went to ShangHai with my family.It was so wonderful that I
could't forget.
We took a bus to Shanghai.The first day ,we visit the Bund.There are lots of wonderful tall buildings.I can see The Oriental Pearl Tower there.It's in PuXi,it'really high!
The second day ,we went to Century Park.
We went boating in the lake ,enjoying the beaty of nature.The wind was warm,like mother's hand.Then we went to see a film.That 's a happy day.
The third day ,we came back. My holiday is so great that Iwant to
go there again
顺便给你找一些网址：
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第2个回答 2019-01-01
my
holiday
Most
of
the
children
like
winter
holiday
very
much.
Because
the
Spring
Festival
is
in
it.
They
can
eat
many
delicious
food
and
get
red
packets.
During
the
winter
holiday,
children
don't
have
school.
They
stay
at
home
and
do
many
things
as
they
like,
but
I
didn't.
I
always
got
up
late
every
day
during
the
Winter
Holiday.
I
had
breakfast
at
nine
o’clock.
After
that,
I
did
my
homework.
The
homework
was
too
much,
and
it
almost
cost
me
the
whole
day.
I
didn't
have
much
time
to
play
with
my
good
friends.What
a
pity!
I
hope
I
had
less
homework
next
winter
holiday.
翻译:大多数孩子都喜欢寒假。因为有春节，他们可以吃好吃的食物，还能拿红包。
在寒假中，孩子们不上课，他们呆在家做自己想做的事情。但是我没有。在寒假里，我每天都起得很晚。我9点钟吃早饭，然后就开始做家庭作业。家庭作业太多了，它几乎花了我整天的时间，我没有许多时间和好朋友玩，真遗憾，我希望下个寒假我的作业会少些。
My
summer
holiday
I
had
a
happy
summer
holiday
because
I
did
many
interesting
things.
I
went
to
the
beach
and
I
swam
in
the
sea.I
called
my
friend
and
played
with
them.I
visited
my
grandparents
and
ate
much
delicious
food.
Then
I
went
to
the
zoo
whit
my
sister.I
was
very
happy.Because
I
saw
a
lot
of
animals.They
were
very
lovely.So
I
took
photos
of
all
animals.I
liked
the
butterflies
best.They
were
colourful
and
beautiful.My
sister
liked
it
too.
I
had
a
wonderful
summer
holiday
this
year.What
about
you?
Can
you
tell
me
somthing
about
it?
holiday
Most
of
the
children
like
winter
holiday
very
much.
Because
the
Spring
Festival
is
in
it.
They
can
eat
many
delicious
food
and
get
red
packets.
During
the
winter
holiday,
children
don't
have
school.
They
stay
at
home
and
do
many
things
as
they
like,
but
I
didn't.
I
always
got
up
late
every
day
during
the
Winter
Holiday.
I
had
breakfast
at
nine
o’clock.
After
that,
I
did
my
homework.
The
homework
was
too
much,
and
it
almost
cost
me
the
whole
day.
I
didn't
have
much
time
to
play
with
my
good
friends.What
a
pity!
I
hope
I
had
less
homework
next
winter
holiday.
翻译:大多数孩子都喜欢寒假。因为有春节，他们可以吃好吃的食物，还能拿红包。
在寒假中，孩子们不上课，他们呆在家做自己想做的事情。但是我没有。在寒假里，我每天都起得很晚。我9点钟吃早饭，然后就开始做家庭作业。家庭作业太多了，它几乎花了我整天的时间，我没有许多时间和好朋友玩，真遗憾，我希望下个寒假我的作业会少些。
My
summer
holiday
I
had
a
happy
summer
holiday
because
I
did
many
interesting
things.
I
went
to
the
beach
and
I
swam
in
the
sea.I
called
my
friend
and
played
with
them.I
visited
my
grandparents
and
ate
much
delicious
food.
Then
I
went
to
the
zoo
whit
my
sister.I
was
very
happy.Because
I
saw
a
lot
of
animals.They
were
very
lovely.So
I
took
photos
of
all
animals.I
liked
the
butterflies
best.They
were
colourful
and
beautiful.My
sister
liked
it
too.
I
had
a
wonderful
summer
holiday
this
year.What
about
you?
Can
you
tell
me
somthing
about
it?
