l love children very much and l want to spread my perfoessional knowledge in the future.That's why l choose this major,but also my dream.Thank you very much for your time and attention.
你好，可以改为：l love children very much and l want to spread my perfoessional knowledge in the future，which is my dream. That's why l choose this major.Thank you very much for your time and attention.
希望能采纳，谢谢追问
希望能采纳，谢谢追问
其实就是想用not only，but also来着，就怕哪里错了，我原句写的有问题吗？
追答有问题，原句不应该用 but also, 应该用and it is also my dream.
如果要用，可以这样：This is not only the reason why I choose this major, but also my dream.
希望能采纳，谢谢
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