题目：作为编辑给他写回信。
Dear editor:
I spend most of my time studying ,I hardly talk to my classmates. Sometimes I do not care about others , but I do wannt to talk . I just don`t know what to talk about and how to begin a conversation.
I feel so lonely.How I wish I had a good friend! Could you give me some advice.
要点：
要相信自己，你最大的问题是缺乏自信
微笑面对同学，让他们知道你是有好的
帮助学习和生活上有困难的同学 100词左右
我的作文：
Dear Jin JIng:
Your problem is a common one among middle school students, maybe the follwing advice can help you.
First, the question isn`t that you are not able to do well as others,but the lack of confidence. So, you should try to be confident and believe that you `re the best. Every person`s smile is beautiful, and so do you. So, show you smile to your classmates,and you will impress them a friendly impression.Then,they will be willing to talk to you. Enjoying helping others.If you do so, your kindness will be paid off in the future.
These are my advice for you, I hope you would be benefited from them.
Yours
X X X
这个是会考的题目，简单了点，希望高手可以帮我按高考的打下分，语言点错误指出来一下，可以修改的地方修改一下，谢谢了~~~~~~~~~~~~~
结构合理，但没能够全面展示出逻辑来，有语法错误，而且写信的开头与结尾没有用上套话，注意。
Dear Jin Jing:
Thank you for telling me about your problem.I think your problem is common one.I hope the follwing advices can help you.
First, the question is not you are not able to do well as others,but the lacking of confidence. So, you should try to be confident and believe that you can do the best. Second, everybody`s smile is beautiful, so do you. Then just show your smile to your classmates, and you can give them a friendly impression. After that,they will be willing to talk to you. Third, enjoy helping others.If you do so, your kindness will be paid off in the future.
These are my advices for you, I hope you would be benefited from it. Best wishes for you.
Yours
X X X
