大神和老师帮忙修改一下语法错误和用词不当

I thanked him very much. By the way, I may need some help in another place in the further. At that time, I may think,helping each other is a simple and happy thing. Lastly, it was happened in the last day of my internship. It was also a big challenge for me and my group. There were 2 people argue about a seat in a subway, they had a big fight, when I saw this, I tried to comfort them, but it was no use. I hurried went to the platform and called a stuff who is work for subway. He agreed with me the way I handled the problem and informed the police. About 2 minutes later, the policeman was coming, this two people was taken by the policeman. After this experience, my teacher gave me a good comment, the LANDUN association also got the information from other aspect, they speak highly to me this way of solve the problem. This experience make me feel more mature to solve the emergency problem, I also felt when people have quarrel, find the police is the most suitable way to solve the problem. From day 17 to day 20, the leader of Subway Company came to WUKESONG station to check their work. When I had a rest, a leader asked me about our work in detail, I answered to the leader in kind voice. She told me the subway company attaches great importance to this work, if you work for one day, you could get 36RMB each day, I told her money is not important to me. She spoke highly of my behavior and noble personality. Next paragraph, let me talk about the relationship between social practice and the major I want to choose.

错的地方不少啊,比如“it was happened in the last day”happen不用被动的;“There were 2 people argue about”这句话有were和argue两个动词了不对,应该arguing,in subway 就好去掉a;“called a stuff who is work for subway”is work 明显错误;“hurried went”也不对;“the policeman was coming”警察came就好;“this two people was taken ”明明两个人,用was不对。总之,很多很多不对和不准确的地方,再去看看。。
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