如题所述
说到英语作文,令很多人头疼,其实是顾虑太多,不用计较词汇量,不用考虑复杂的语法,在得分方面,妙句频出,语法复杂,内容丰富的文章与满足题意,要点齐全的水文也就1-2分之差,对于面对作文就头疼的人来说,登上顶峰固然难,稍微低一头确是触手可得。
作文写作一定要注意三点:一是审题,二是构思,三是检查。否则,任你妙笔生花,偏题、跑题照样不得分。下面由简单到复杂,我准备了三篇例文,希望对你有帮助哟!
审题:关键点就是我为自己自豪。所以简单的就是一件令自己有自豪感的事情就可以。不需要多么伟大的事情,自己与自己比较,每天都在进步,值得自豪,与同学比自己更受欢迎,更有人缘,值得自豪,与偶像、梦想比,距离一天一天在缩短更值得自豪。
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英语作文:
Last Sunday I go to the supermarket with my mother.We bought a lot of things and had lunch in it.The meal was very delicious.I liked it very much.When we decided to go home,we heard a sudden noise.A woman screamed‘ the man in blue stole my purse.’That man ran very quickly and many people chased after him.l dialled 110 at once.Moments later,police came and caught him.l did a good thing.I am very proud of myself.
翻译:
上周日,我和妈妈一起去了超市。我们买了很多东西,在里面吃了午饭。这顿饭非常美味。我非常喜欢。当我们决定回家时,我们突然听到一声噪音。一个女人尖叫道:“那个穿蓝色衣服的男人偷了我的钱包。”那个人跑得很快,很多人追着他。我立刻拨打了110。过了一会儿,警察来抓了他。我做了一件好事。我为自己感到骄傲。
英语作文:
Life is full of the unexpected.If you face them bravely and positively,you'll have unlimited potential and look at yourself with admiration .
I remember it was the thing that I had waited for a long time-the Chinese speech.As the teacher told us about it.I came to know it was my turn to show myself. And in the next few days,I did nothing but practice my speech. when the day finally came and as I stood in the front of the classroom, my mind got blank.At that time,I asked my self to keep calm and imagined myself making a speech in front of the mirror.This worked well and the fact fear was gone. Eventually,I finished the speech fluently and confidently.it is a good beginning.
After that, whenever I never meet challenge, I'll think about this experience and then I' continue to fight on confidently.i am proud of myself.
翻译:
生活总是充满了意外。如果你积极勇敢的面对它们,你就会有无限的潜能,自己也会钦佩自己。
我记得一件事情,那是我已经为之等待了很长时间的一次语文演讲。就像老师告诉我们的那样,我知道展示自己的机会到了。在接下来的几天里,我什么也没做,只是练习我的演讲。当这一天终于到来时,当我站在教室前面时,我的脑海里一片空白。当时,我要求自己保持冷静,想象自己在镜子前发表演讲。这很有效,恐惧也随之消失了。最终,我流利而自信地完成了演讲。这是一个良好的开端。
在那之后,每当我从未遇到挑战时,我都会想起这段经历,然后我会充满自信的与之战斗,我为这样的自己自豪。
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英语作文
I have a gold medal on my desk on which it writes Championship for the Team Cloud League Volleyball Match for the year 2022. I can not help thinking of all the precious moments of the day.They are like shining diamonds .
lying in my mind, giving me so much happiness and pride That was the first time that I played as the team leader, also the settler in a formal League Match. My team played six matches in a run and finally won the championship. Above all, I won the Most Valuable Player among all the players for that day. This was really incredible and I felt like I was too excited to move my legs when I heard my name being called.
At the moment when I took over the Gold Cup from the award presenter, I was so proud of myself. This was a great achievement for me.
I started playing volleyball 2 years ago. I was the weakest and one of the smallest in my team,in the very beginning. I still recalled my first match as a standby and how poorly I performed back then. How I wish I could play more in the ground, but as a standby it is impossible.
After that I practiced more. I took the professional volleyball course after school, on weekends and in winter and summer holidays. The more I practiced, the more skillful I got. I have a dream in my mind. One day I will be the best in the ground.
It was amazing that I did it. I grew up as the core player of my team. What is more amazing is I have a group of friends. We share the happiness and sadness together. I have a lot fun with all my friends.
I love volleyball and I am so grateful about all it gives to me. I am so proud of myself, and hopefully I will keep on to win more matches with my team, and my best friends.
翻译:
我的桌子上有一块金牌,上面写着2022年团队云联赛排球赛冠军。我不禁想起了一天中所有的珍贵时刻。它们就像躺在我脑海中的闪闪发光的钻石,给了我如此多的幸福和自豪。那是我第一次在正式的联赛中担任队长,也是定居者。我的球队连续打了六场比赛,最终赢得了冠军。最重要的是,我赢得了当天所有球员中最有价值球员的称号。这真的太不可思议了,当我听到有人叫我的名字时,我觉得我太兴奋了,连腿都动不了。
当我从颁奖嘉宾手中接过金杯的那一刻,我为自己感到骄傲。这对我来说是一个伟大的成就。
我两年前开始打排球。在刚开始的时候,我是团队中最弱的,也是最小的一个。我仍然记得我作为替补的第一场比赛,以及当时的糟糕表现。我多么希望我能在地面上打更多的比赛,但作为一名替补,这是不可能的。
在那之后,我进行了更多的练习。我在放学后、周末、寒暑假参加了职业排球课程。我练习得越多,技巧就越娴熟。我心中有一个梦想。总有一天我会成为世界上最好的。
我做到了,真是太神奇了。我成长为球队的核心球员。更令人惊讶的是,我有一群朋友。我们一起分享快乐和悲伤。我和我所有的朋友玩得很开心。
我热爱排球,我非常感激它给我的一切。我为自己感到骄傲,希望我能继续与我的球队和我最好的朋友赢得更多的比赛。