例句:
原句:At this time I am writing to you to enclose an interview card, which has been post-paid, for the purpose of arranging a convenient time when we might get together for a personal interview.
改后:Please return the enclosed interview card to set up a convenient time for an interview.
原句:In addition, will you please permit me to state in this letter that we will welcome any suggestions or comments that you may have any time if you think of any methods for the improvement of our service to our customers.
改后:Also, we welcome any suggestions for improving our service to you.
以下为需要改的句子:
1.Please be assured that we’re now rechecking and reviewing all our specifications as it is our earnest and most sincere desire to be certain and for sure that this machine gives you satisfaction and good service in every possible way in the future.
2.We hereby wish to let you know that our company is pleased with the confidence you have reposed in us.
3.Will you ship us sometime, anytime during the month of October would be fine, or even November if you are rushed (November would suit us just as well, in fact a little bit better) 300 of the regular 3- by 15-inch blue felt arm-bands with white sewn letters in the center. Thank you in advance for sending these along to us by parcel post, and not express, as express is too expensive.
如例句,不一定使用原句词句,只要意思一致即可,长句化简。答案不止一个。请高手尽力提供最适合的答案。时间在周4前。谢谢!
2 Our company is pleased to see your confidence on us.
3 Wish you ship 300 of the regular 3- by 15-inch blue felt arm-bands with white sewn letters in the center on October, November will be better, by parcel post other than express.
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