Graduation finally came. My classmates and I decide to do something special.Before a heated discussion, we were determined to making a video to record our experiences at school.Material collecting took us whole week, during that we interviewed our teachers and took pictures of them. The editing part was difficult.We debated over what to put into the video. To our delighted ,the video turned out to be perfect.Several days late, when the video was played on the graduation celebration, it was thought high of by all the people. That surely gave them a sense of achievement .The teachers and students with a great time.
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Graduation finally came. My classmates and I decide->decided to do something special.Before a heated discussion, we were determined->determining to making a video to record our experiences at school.Material collecting took us [a] whole week, during that we interviewed our teachers and took pictures of them. The editing part was difficult.We were debated over what to put into the video. To our delighted ,the video turned out to be perfect.Several days later, when the video was played on the graduation celebration, it was thought high of by all the people. That surely gave them a sense of achievement .The teachers and students with a great time.
2 before-after在讨论之后
3 删除were 直接是we determine
4 making-make(determine to do)
5took-taking做状语
6 a whole week
7during that(time)
8To our delighted--to our delight
9删除of
10Several days (later)
11them-us
12 with a great time.--had a great time本回答被提问者采纳
decide~decided 2. before~with 3.we were detemined~we detemined
4.making~make 5. took us whole week~took us a whole week 6 during that~during that time 7.several days late~several days later 8 high of~highly of
9.with a great time ~had a great time
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