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1，MY FAVOURITE FRUIT
My favourite fruit is apple because apple is very good for our body.——One day one apple,docter is far away from me.So I eat apple all day and night.I think I will be healthy if I eat apple every day.However,apple is tasted very good！
,2，My favourite fruit
There are so many kinds of fruit.My favourite fruit are bananas and pears.They taste very nice.When I eat them.I feel so happy and cool.I always invite my friends and my parents to enjoy them with me.They make me happy. So I love bananas and pears best.
水果的种类有很多，我最喜欢的水果是香蕉和梨。它们的味道非常香甜。当我吃的时候，我感觉很开心很清爽。我总是邀请我的朋友和父母来与我一起分享。他们让我非常开心，所以我最喜欢香蕉和梨。
1，MY FAVOURITE FRUIT
My favourite fruit is apple because apple is very good for our body.——One day one apple,docter is far away from me.So I eat apple all day and night.I think I will be healthy if I eat apple every day.However,apple is tasted very good！
,2，My favourite fruit
There are so many kinds of fruit.My favourite fruit are bananas and pears.They taste very nice.When I eat them.I feel so happy and cool.I always invite my friends and my parents to enjoy them with me.They make me happy. So I love bananas and pears best.
水果的种类有很多，我最喜欢的水果是香蕉和梨。它们的味道非常香甜。当我吃的时候，我感觉很开心很清爽。我总是邀请我的朋友和父母来与我一起分享。他们让我非常开心，所以我最喜欢香蕉和梨。
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第1个回答 2013-06-28
My Favourite Food
I eat many kinds of fruits. They are pears, watermelons, apples, bananas, grapes, strawberries and so on. But I like grapes best. There are green grapes, red grapes and purple grapes. They all look beautiful. Grapes taste very nice . They are sweet and a little sour, They are good for our health . So grapes are my favourite fruit.本回答被提问者采纳
I eat many kinds of fruits. They are pears, watermelons, apples, bananas, grapes, strawberries and so on. But I like grapes best. There are green grapes, red grapes and purple grapes. They all look beautiful. Grapes taste very nice . They are sweet and a little sour, They are good for our health . So grapes are my favourite fruit.本回答被提问者采纳
