帮我看看我写的英语作文里有没有语法错误

I think I am the best in the world.Li Bai has said:there must be a natural
material I use.So i find my advantages hardly.I found that I am good at singing , When I am free ,I often listen to music and sing . I do well in writing as well . I think Chinese is insteresting . I enjoy reading The Book Of Songs.I think I have a lot of advantages I haven't found. So I will continue to find my advantages.

I think(believe) I am the best in the world.Li Bai has(delete) said:there must be a natural
material I use.So i find(found) my advantages hardly.I found that I am good at singing , When I am(was) free ,I often listen to music and sing . I do well in writing as well . I think(feel) Chinese is insteresting . I enjoy reading The Book Of Songs.I think I (still) have a lot of advantages I haven't (yet)found. So I will continue to find my advantages.
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第1个回答  2013-03-08
楼上说的很好了 再补充一点
there must be a natural material I use我猜你这句是想说“天生我材必有用”正确的翻译是
everyone is born useful.

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第1个回答  2013-03-08
Errors:

1) I think ---> I think that
2) there must be a natural material I use ---> 不知说什么意思,建议你直接说中文
3) So i find --> 应为大写 I
4) So i find my advantages hardly ---> 不知说什么意思,建议你直接说中文

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其他不说了。

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