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Subject: A Standard of a Good Student
When it comes to the standard of a good student, different people have different ideas.Some believe that a good student is the one that is good at his/her study. Others think that a good student is the one that is excellent in all aspects,, but not just good at his/her study.For me, I prefer the latter.
The standard of a good student should not just base on his/her good study, but also should decide on other aspects, such as communication skills with other students or teachers, his real abilities.To be honest, everybody likes the student who is good at study. But to be good at study can’t means everything. To be good at study can’t mean that he/her can do everything when he/her graduates from school. Nowadays, the society needs more people who are good at communication and have the ability in face the emergency, rather just good at study. According to some newspaper, some companies would rather prefer the student who is not good at study in his/her schools but with good communication skills and other abilities,than the one who is good at study but hasn't abilities and communication skills.
From above-mentioned,I believe that to judge a student is good or not, should decide on his/her properties in every aspects, but rather only consider his/her good study.
第一段:先阐述好学生的标准是什么?有人认为好学生的标准就是功课好.有人则认为好学生的标准应是在各方面都全面发展的,而不仅仅只是学习好.作者赞同后面的观点.
第二段:详细阐述作者的观点.
第三段:总结,再一次强调作者的观点.
(以上也是写作文的最基本的思路,希望可以给与参考)
When it comes to the standard of a good student, different people have different ideas.Some believe that a good student is the one that is good at his/her study. Others think that a good student is the one that is excellent in all aspects,, but not just good at his/her study.For me, I prefer the latter.
The standard of a good student should not just base on his/her good study, but also should decide on other aspects, such as communication skills with other students or teachers, his real abilities.To be honest, everybody likes the student who is good at study. But to be good at study can’t means everything. To be good at study can’t mean that he/her can do everything when he/her graduates from school. Nowadays, the society needs more people who are good at communication and have the ability in face the emergency, rather just good at study. According to some newspaper, some companies would rather prefer the student who is not good at study in his/her schools but with good communication skills and other abilities,than the one who is good at study but hasn't abilities and communication skills.
From above-mentioned,I believe that to judge a student is good or not, should decide on his/her properties in every aspects, but rather only consider his/her good study.
第一段:先阐述好学生的标准是什么?有人认为好学生的标准就是功课好.有人则认为好学生的标准应是在各方面都全面发展的,而不仅仅只是学习好.作者赞同后面的观点.
第二段:详细阐述作者的观点.
第三段:总结,再一次强调作者的观点.
(以上也是写作文的最基本的思路,希望可以给与参考)
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第1个回答 2013-04-03
根据我多年的教学实践总结了英语满分作文的5大要素，下面附上仅供参考：
1.要点齐全。包括达到文字数量的要求，给出的中英文提示，显性和隐性的图片内容，个人评价和议论等等；
2.语词无误。意思就是通篇文章语法规范，词汇拼写和形式变化正确无误；
3.符合逻辑。指的是语言表达符合时间、空间的顺序，符合事物发展的逻辑推理，不能颠三倒四，也不重复啰嗦；
4.句式灵活有效。在保证没有语法和词汇错误的前提下，尽量把句式表达得多样性，如适当加入一些复合句，感叹句，设问句，句子之间尽量使用过度的连词，过度的副词，表示时间和先后顺序，或者是转折并列等等。但是没有把握的情况下，尽量写一些简单句，免得弄巧成拙。多利用同义词（组，句）表达类似的信息。能过写上1-2句谚语，名言警句就会增加亮点，起着画龙点睛的作用；
5.书面整洁、标点规范无误。在有时间的情况下，尽量先打好草稿，如列出提纲和句数，把要点逐一落实，修改之后才誊写上去。书面和标点会直接影响评卷老师的印象分，尽量避免在书写方面被扣分，不值得。平时练习就要对自己严格要求，不能龙飞凤舞，横看成岭侧成峰。还要注意英语里面的标点有些与汉语是不一样的。
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1.要点齐全。包括达到文字数量的要求，给出的中英文提示，显性和隐性的图片内容，个人评价和议论等等；
2.语词无误。意思就是通篇文章语法规范，词汇拼写和形式变化正确无误；
3.符合逻辑。指的是语言表达符合时间、空间的顺序，符合事物发展的逻辑推理，不能颠三倒四，也不重复啰嗦；
4.句式灵活有效。在保证没有语法和词汇错误的前提下，尽量把句式表达得多样性，如适当加入一些复合句，感叹句，设问句，句子之间尽量使用过度的连词，过度的副词，表示时间和先后顺序，或者是转折并列等等。但是没有把握的情况下，尽量写一些简单句，免得弄巧成拙。多利用同义词（组，句）表达类似的信息。能过写上1-2句谚语，名言警句就会增加亮点，起着画龙点睛的作用；
5.书面整洁、标点规范无误。在有时间的情况下，尽量先打好草稿，如列出提纲和句数，把要点逐一落实，修改之后才誊写上去。书面和标点会直接影响评卷老师的印象分，尽量避免在书写方面被扣分，不值得。平时练习就要对自己严格要求，不能龙飞凤舞，横看成岭侧成峰。还要注意英语里面的标点有些与汉语是不一样的。
需要更多了解，QQ376085074.
第2个回答 2013-04-04
一、Are you a good student?
What do you think a good student is like? I think a good student should be hard-working first. If we don’t study hard, how can we do something for our society in the future? I also think a good student should like reading. Reading is very important. And a good student should be helpful and friendly to others. At last I think a good student should get on well with other classmates. Then we can have a colorful life. I’m sure everyone wants to be a good student.
二、 Being a good student
Three attributes can help people in their studies. First, a sense of responsibility is important for building a sound character. If you aren't responsible, you'll postpone your assignments or devote too little time to your schoolwork. Second, in school life, relationships between people are valuable. Friends can bring you happiness and laughter. In addition, you can discuss problems and pursue knowledge with them. Last, it is important to have a constructive philosophy of life. If you are defeated, don't be disappointed. Try to face your life and your studies with courage and determination. If you can work toward these goals, you'll become a well-rounded and versatile student instead of being a bookworm.
What do you think a good student is like? I think a good student should be hard-working first. If we don’t study hard, how can we do something for our society in the future? I also think a good student should like reading. Reading is very important. And a good student should be helpful and friendly to others. At last I think a good student should get on well with other classmates. Then we can have a colorful life. I’m sure everyone wants to be a good student.
二、 Being a good student
Three attributes can help people in their studies. First, a sense of responsibility is important for building a sound character. If you aren't responsible, you'll postpone your assignments or devote too little time to your schoolwork. Second, in school life, relationships between people are valuable. Friends can bring you happiness and laughter. In addition, you can discuss problems and pursue knowledge with them. Last, it is important to have a constructive philosophy of life. If you are defeated, don't be disappointed. Try to face your life and your studies with courage and determination. If you can work toward these goals, you'll become a well-rounded and versatile student instead of being a bookworm.
