Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic The Most Unforgettable Thing （最难忘的一件事）. You should write more than 100 words in this composition.
1. 介绍这件让你难忘的事情。
2. 说明这件事情对你的生活或者学习有什么影响；
Yesterday,my mum took me to the park. We took a bus there. When the bus stoped at a bus stop.There came an old woman. My mum standed up and gave her seat to the old lady.She told me that she likes to help others because she will get happy after helping others. I am very happy that day.And I will remember this thing forever.
昨天妈妈带我去公园玩，公车到站是上来一位老太太，妈妈让座给她，并告诉我帮助别人能给自己带来快乐，这件事老让我印象深刻。
需要改进的地方：
1、过去时态
2、加时间、地点、起因
3、字数要求达到120字以上
Yesterday,my mum and me went to the park.To get to the park,we took a bus.when the bus stoped at a bus stop,an old woman was coming.My mom stood up at once.For she wanted to give the seat to the old woman.Then she told me that she would be happy to do like this because she would get happy after helping others.Hearing this,I was moved.That day was really an unforgettable day.Not only did I feel happy that day,but also had I learned a lot from my mother. I will remember this daay forever.
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第1个回答 2013-06-13
I had a good time yestrday.My mum took me to the park. We took a bus. When the bus stopped at stop.An old lady get on the bus.The old lady was in a black coat.My mum stood up and gave her seat to the old lady.The old lady said that it was so kind and she is greatful.My mum told me that she likes to help others because she will feel happy after helping others. I was very happy that day.And it's so unforgettable that I will remember this thing forever.
第2个回答 2020-03-26
昨天,我妈妈和我去公园了。到公园后,我们坐公交车。当公共汽车停止在一个公共汽车站,一个老女人来了。我的妈妈立刻站了起来。因为她想把座位让给那位老妇人。然后她告诉我,她很乐意这样做,因为她会快乐帮助别人之后。听到这些,我很感动。那一天真的是一个难忘的日子。我不仅感到快乐的那一天,但也有我学了很多从我的母亲。我将永远记住这一天。
第3个回答 2013-06-13
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