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As an old saying goes,"failure is the mother of success."Yes, success tend to come with an abundance of self-confidence and perseverance efforts.

I have a friend named Mary.As everyone knows,Mary is a beautiful but timid girl.Although she grew up with me as a kid, she was a little bit fearful to talk with me!It is much of the shyness she shows in her personality keeps others away from her so that she owns few friend.When she chats with me in private,she cannot help giving such sigh.:"How could I so shy!I really want to be a brave person!"In the wake of giving my advice to her,she had a good knowledge of her existing problems.So ,in the coming days,Mary was beginning to do her utmost to communicat and talk to others .And then she uses any occasions and shots to .show her kindness and friendness. .At the frist time,she was not left out.Causeverybody thought it was too weird for her.Mary was very frustrated,however,she did not give up to be friendly.Finally,it did works.Mary has become the most popular girl across my class.On seeing the dramatice change in her,I fhink to myself:This exactly has heralded another old saying:No pains, no gains.Is this the vivid reflection of a progressive and optimistic girl?

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