我喜欢奥黛丽。赫本，她很美，但是她老年的照片根本没有年轻的时候青春灵动。这说明，人总是会老的。还有，她的婚姻不算幸福美满，所以，漂不漂亮不代表幸不幸福。我虽然很想变漂亮，但更希望自己的一生是个喜剧，红颜薄命还是不要为好。
I like Audrey Kathleen Hepburn Ruston because she is so beautiful,but,her senile photos shows her appearance was no longer pretty as her young ages.It proves,people will always grow old.In addition,her marriage is far from perfectly satisfactory,therefore,happiness doesn't decide on whether you are beautiful or not.Although i want to be more pretty,I like most to have a happy life,rather than be an unfortunate beauty.
我喜欢奥黛丽·赫本Ruston凯瑟琳,因为她是那么的美丽,但她的照片显示她的外表是衰老不再漂亮她年轻的年龄。这证明了,人们总是会变老的。此外,她的婚姻不是完全满意,因此,幸福并不决定你是否很漂亮与否。虽然我想更漂亮,我最喜欢拥有一个快乐的生活,而不是一个不幸的美丽。 你翻译的还不错
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第1个回答 2012-08-03
以下是修改意见：
I like Audrey Hepburn （不用说全名）because she is so beautiful. But in the photos, aged her is not as pretty and energetic as she was once young. It proves people will always grow old. In addition, her marriage brings few happiness but more tragedy. Therefore, prettiness doesn't necessarily leads to happiness. Although I'd like to be pretty, more would I want is to have a happy life, rather than being an unfortunate beauty.
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I like Audrey Hepburn （不用说全名）because she is so beautiful. But in the photos, aged her is not as pretty and energetic as she was once young. It proves people will always grow old. In addition, her marriage brings few happiness but more tragedy. Therefore, prettiness doesn't necessarily leads to happiness. Although I'd like to be pretty, more would I want is to have a happy life, rather than being an unfortunate beauty.
希望能帮到你：）
第2个回答 2012-08-03
I like Audrey Kathleen Hepburn Ruston because she is such a belle,but,her senile photos shows her appearance was no longer divine from her early days.It signifies the inevitable truth of ageing.In addition,her marriage is far from the perfect 'happily ever after',therefore,happiness doesn't decide on whether you are beautiful or not.Although i would love to be more beautiful,I prefer to live a happy life more,rather than be an unfortunate beauty.
just small changes,
scrap the word 'satisfactory' because it's repetitive本回答被提问者和网友采纳
just small changes,
scrap the word 'satisfactory' because it's repetitive本回答被提问者和网友采纳
第3个回答 2012-08-03
个人觉得没问题
第4个回答 2012-08-03
想法还挺多啊
问题也多多，自己改
was no longer pretty as her young ages
It proves,
will always grow old
decide on
,I like most to have a happy life,rather than be an unfortunate beauty.
问题也多多，自己改
was no longer pretty as her young ages
It proves,
will always grow old
decide on
,I like most to have a happy life,rather than be an unfortunate beauty.
