去上学了，当时正是上班的高峰期，他不小心就被车撞了，他很痛苦，司机向他道歉，过了不久，警察来了，对那个司机和Tim进行了教育，然后Tim就去医院了。要用到rush hour，cross，make sure，come over，traffic rules，要绝对准确，用过去式写，60到80词，初二的水平。
Last Monday, Tim got up at seven fourty.After breakfast he went to school by bicycle.It was rush hour and he was hit by a car when he went across the street. He was very painful,and then the driver apologized to him. In a little while, the police came over and educated them,and made sure that they would never break the traffic rules.Then Tim was sent to the hospital.
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第1个回答 2012-12-18
Last Monday, Tim got up at seven forty. It was already late for school. After he finished his breakfast, he rushed to school by bike. It was peaking hour. When he crossed the road but he did not make sure that there was no car around him, he was then hit by a car. The car driver came over and said sorry to him. After a while, the police came and told the driver to follow traffic rules. Then Tim was sent to the hospital. (80字)本回答被提问者采纳
