去上学了，当时正是上班的高峰期，他不小心就被车撞了，他很痛苦，司机向他道歉，过了不久，警察来了，对那个司机和Tim进行了教育，然后Tim就去医院了。要用到rush hour，cross，make sure，come over，traffic rules，要绝对准确，用过去式写，60到80词，初二的水平。
Tim's BIG DAY!
Tim waked up at 7:40 last Monday morning. After he finished his breakfast he went to school by his bicycle. Unfortunately, it was rush hour and he was hurted by a car in an accident which makes him painful when crossed the road. Before the cop came to here the driver made his apologize to Tim. The cop made sure that they both understood the traffic rules and then picked Tim to the hospital.
Tim waked up at 7:40 last Monday morning. After he finished his breakfast he went to school by his bicycle. Unfortunately, it was rush hour and he was hurted by a car in an accident which makes him painful when crossed the road. Before the cop came to here the driver made his apologize to Tim. The cop made sure that they both understood the traffic rules and then picked Tim to the hospital.
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第1个回答 2012-12-18
Last monday, Tim woke up at 7:40 am. After he had the breakfast,he went to school by bicycle. It was a rush hour. However, he was crushed by a car when he acrossed the road.He felt painful.The driver apologized to him.After a meanwhile, the police came and explained the traffic rules to the driver and Tim. After that, Tim was sent to the hospital.
第2个回答 2012-12-18
Tim got up at 7:40am .After finished his breakfast ,he rode to school when it was rush hour .Carelessly he was hit by a car when he was crossing the road ,it hurt very much .The driver apologied to him and made sure that he was okay . A moment later came over the policemen .They teached Tim and the driver to obey the traffic rules .
第3个回答 2012-12-18
to go to school, at that time is the peak of work, he accidentally knocked down by a car, he is very painful, the driver to apologize to him, after a while, the police came, with the driver and Tim were education, then Tim goes to the hospital.
