1. Because television’s first large-scale transmissions included news programs quickly became popular with the public.
2. By increasing the time allotment for network news to thirty minutes increased the prestige of network news programs.
3. Lloyd Robertson’s outstanding characteristic is credible as a newscaster.
4. A disaster is when television news shows get some of their highest ratings.
5. One reason television news captured widespread attention is because it covered the Vietnam war so thoroughly.
2. ( Increasing the time allotment for network news to thirty minutes ) increased the prestige of network news programs.-----括号里面是动名词做主语
3. Lloyd Robertson’s outstanding character is credible as a newscaster.-------把形容词变成名词，做主语
4. IT IS A disaster when television news shows get some of their highest ratings.-------缺少主语
5. One reason WHY television news captured widespread attention WAS THAT it covered the Vietnam war so thoroughly.---------缺少连接词why和that.
2.By increasing the time allotment for network news to thirty minutes, the prestige of network news programs increased .
3.Lloyd Robertson’s outstanding characteristic as a newscaster is credibility .
4.A disaster is that television news shows get some of their highest ratings.
5. One reason why television news captured widespread attention is that it covered the Vietnam war so thoroughly.
2.By去掉
3. characteristic改为character
4.when去掉，或者改为that
5.because 去掉，或改为that
2 去掉by
3 As a newscaster, Loyd.....
4 It is a disaster when ....
5 把because改成that
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